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A shape, or sound, or tint;
Don't state the matter plainly,
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Stainqueen
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 |  Subject: Awkward Love  Wed Jul 14, 2010 8:37 pm | |
| I'm trying to create a semi-romantic relationship between two characters, but right now it all just seems awkward. I've tried it a different way, but then it turned too romantic. I'm just trying to create kind of an affectionate relationship, does anyone have any advice? | |
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| | Subject: Re: Awkward Love Thu Jul 15, 2010 8:31 pm | |
| Think about how two people would act. If it seems natural, it's probably realistic. Watch people if it helps. | |
| | | | Stainqueen
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| | Subject: Re: Awkward Love Thu Jul 15, 2010 10:38 pm | |
| ooh, PEOPLE WATCHING!!!!! YEAY!!!!! I guess maybe it takes a little personal experience with romantic relationships of which I have none. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Awkward Love Sat Jul 17, 2010 7:56 am | |
| Yeah. People watching is the next best method. | |
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